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One Boys Poem About His Beloved Pet

A few months back I mentioned a poetry contest that is being held by Pets Add Life.

The 5th Annual Pets Add Life Children’s Poetry Contest is open to children in grades 3rd-8th and seeing that Bobby is in 5th grade and has recently gotten his very first pet I thought it might be something that he would enjoy doing.

There are some great prizes that kids can win for the contest including a $1,000 scholarship for each winning student’s classroom.

While the scholarship would be awesome, I thought this was more of an opportunity for Bobby to work on his writing skills and put into words how he feels about Gibby.

After a few rough drafts, even though I’m bias, I think he did a pretty good job and I’d like to share the poem that he submitted to the contest with you:

 

 

Gibby the guinea pig is my very first pet.

I have loved him from the very first day that we met.

He makes me smile when he wiggles his little black nose
and I laugh out loud when he nibbles on my toes.

I always run to see him when I get home from school
and all my friends think that Gibby is super cool.

It’s a lot of hard work to care for a pet

but having Gibby in my life is as good as it gets!

Not bad for a first timer, right?

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  • Rottrover says:

    Good luck, Bobby! You did great!

    January 22, 2013 at 1:12 am
  • SUGAR: Golden Woofs says:

    Woof! Woof! Very GOOD! Love the words at the end … Great Job Bobby. Lots of Golden woofs, Sugar

    January 22, 2013 at 1:21 am
  • Daisy says:

    Excellent! Good work, Bobby, and good luck.

    XXXOOO Daisy, Bella & Roxy

    January 22, 2013 at 1:47 am
  • Sherrell Fick says:

    Nice job Bobby. Gibby is super cute. Good luck in the contest!!!

    Sherrell

    January 22, 2013 at 2:47 am
  • Sue at Talking Dogs says:

    LOVE that poem! (and such a sweet photo!)

    January 22, 2013 at 6:13 am
  • caren gittleman says:

    not bad at all! Great job Bobby and best of luck!

    January 22, 2013 at 6:59 am
  • melF says:

    That’s an awesome poem!!! Really, really good! I hope you win Bobby. I know Gibby wants you to win too. :)

    January 22, 2013 at 7:28 am
  • 2 brown dawgs says:

    That is excellent! I hope he wins!

    January 22, 2013 at 7:36 am
  • Vicki says:

    Well done Bobby! An Gibby is certainly super cool!

    January 22, 2013 at 7:44 am
  • Taryn says:

    That’s wonderful!

    January 22, 2013 at 8:06 am
  • houndstooth says:

    Aww! I feel all warm and fuzzy now! I think you should include some of Gibby’s awesome pictures and it would be a guaranteed win!

    January 22, 2013 at 8:35 am
  • Bella says:

    Good luck Bobby – you gotta win!

    January 22, 2013 at 9:11 am
  • Jodi says:

    That is so cute!! I hope he wins. :-)

    January 22, 2013 at 9:47 am
  • Kristine says:

    Not bad at all! I am no poet myself but can appreciate the hard work of others. I think it’s such a great idea for a contest and I’ll have my fingers crossed for him.

    Gibby is a very lucky little guy.

    January 22, 2013 at 10:02 am
  • Missy@dawsondogs says:

    That is a great poem. Very talented boy there.

    January 22, 2013 at 11:27 am
  • kristi says:

    Once again it amazes me how much talent Bobby & Gracie get from me!

    January 22, 2013 at 11:29 am
  • jan says:

    Bobby, you’re on your way to being the Poet Laureate of Dogdom. Good luck.

    January 22, 2013 at 12:15 pm
  • Sam says:

    Awesome! I like that he is proud to express his love for his pet!

    Sam

    January 22, 2013 at 12:57 pm
  • Blueberry's human says:

    Love it!

    Good job Bobby – hope you win!!

    January 22, 2013 at 1:16 pm
  • Two French Bulldogs says:

    What a great poem!
    Benny & Lily

    January 22, 2013 at 3:28 pm
  • Diana Stoll says:

    Nice job, Bobby! :)

    January 22, 2013 at 4:25 pm
  • Amy@GoPetFriendly says:

    Simple, to the point, and very eloquent – it’s an excellent poem, Bobby!

    January 22, 2013 at 5:13 pm
  • Mom says:

    Wow!! I am impressed with Bobby’s poem. Hope he keeps up the good skills in writing.

    January 22, 2013 at 6:06 pm
  • Bebe says:

    Great piece of poetry!

    Truly is as good as it gets :)

    January 22, 2013 at 8:08 pm
  • Cara says:

    Great job, Bobby. Keep up the poetry. My son is in tenth grade and wants to be a poet. Our black lab is named Gibbs– and your poem could almost be describing him!

    January 22, 2013 at 8:33 pm
  • Julie says:

    Nice work Bobby! Very impressive ;)

    January 22, 2013 at 11:02 pm
  • Eva or sometimes Priscilla says:

    You did superb, Bobby! Good luck!

    January 23, 2013 at 2:15 am
  • Clowie says:

    That’s sweet!

    January 23, 2013 at 10:25 am
  • Nichole says:

    Awesome job to your boy! Very sweet and loving!

    January 23, 2013 at 6:02 pm
  • Pup Fan says:

    Really great poem!

    January 23, 2013 at 9:32 pm
  • Loy Cerf says:

    Very sweet! I’m so glad he is loving and enjoying having a pet of his very own.

    January 26, 2013 at 11:45 am

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